DaydreamingI don’t know why the world keeps turning without me. I wish it would stop and let me catch up. Or just chill so both of us can relax. Take in a day long sunset and nap for a few hours. Spend a day contemplating the nature of sunflowers and why they make me sad when they wilt. Learn how to fly from watching butterflies and have dinner with the moon. Be calm and see the silly in the serious and learn to smile again like it was something new.Daydreaming by angiee45
The Eiru Inheritance (Contest Entry)Have you ever thought you heard someone call your name and when you check it turns out no one did? Well that happened to me one morning. It was strange that I thought I heard someone call me because I live alone. Well, not completely alone. There’s my dog Bob, but he can’t talk so he could never call me. But I could swear I heard someone call “Anna”, just as I was getting up this morning. After a few moments of listening for the call to come again and then wondering why I was waiting for no one to call me, I dragged myself out of bed and got ready for work.The Eiru Inheritance (Contest Entry) by angiee45
I had the morning news on in the background as I finished getting ready. I brushed my blonde hair in the usual way and took stock of the pink streak in it. It would probably stay bright like that for about another week before I have to color it again.
According to the news, the weather would be nice so I grabbed a light jacket, fed Bob and was on my way to the door when I noticed the stack of unopened mail. I
Edward and Bella vs Jacob and BellaNote that this comparison is based mostly on the first three books because I have only seen clips of the movies and have not read Breaking Dawn. What I know about Breaking Dawn comes from internet research including book reviews, and trips to the Twilight wikia.Edward and Bella vs Jacob and Bella by angiee45
Edward and Bella
· Their relationship is very uneven. Edwards is rich and beautiful. Bella is plain and middle class. She complains about the unevenness of the relationship. Bella constantly feels like she doesn’t belong with Edward and that he is too good for her. He is out of her league.
· Edward makes decisions about her life without consulting her. Example: The decision to try to hide Bella from James by running away was made without her consent and she begs Edward to let her go home to say something to her father before they leave Forks.
Logic's Insight: Twilight Part 4Reason #4 for hating Twilight: Everything else!
So if you've been paying attention up to this point, then you'll see that Twilight lacks everything that a love story needs to work. It doesn't have characters that we care about, it doesn't have a relationship dynamic that fits with the story or the choices of the characters, and it's story is dull and stretched out longer than it needs to without anything ever affecting the characters or testing their bonds. The lore of the saga can't even stay consistent with itself and doesn't leave any room for real dramatic tension.
Despite this, the saga is selling extremely well. The saga is a gold mine! The books sell extremely well since the first book's debut and have garnered a moderate amount of critical praise because of it's influence; the movies have grossed a grand total of two and a half billion dollars on a total budget of two hundred and fifty million dollars; and it has a large and powerfull
Logic's Insight: Twilight Part 2
Reason #2 for hating Twilight, the relationship and dynamic
So we all know that Twilight's entire infrastructure is no longer valid because the central characters of the love story fail to make us care about them. Without that, we don't care about them getting together or about what might happen because of it.
But let's pretend that physical features can constitute a bond and that we care about them for a few minutes. It wouldn't matter because everything about their relationship and the dynamic it holds is wrong. Everything about their little tale is so horribly wrong.
You see, every love story has a certain dynamic that affects it's mood and tone, kind of like an overarching cloud that the story lies within. These dynamics come out in how the love story plays out and can wildly vary since love stories are so diverse and numerous.
Here's a few examples: Passsionate but forbidden romance; an animosity that still remains despite a g
I am a writer because I was born that way. I have stories in my head all the time. Most of then never get written down or finished. If I never make a single penny from my work I am still a writer. I will die with a bookshelf full of my notebooks with all my little writings in them.|
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