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Daydreaming
I don’t know why the world keeps turning without me. I wish it would stop and let me catch up. Or just chill so both of us can relax. Take in a day long sunset and nap for a few hours. Spend a day contemplating the nature of sunflowers and why they make me sad when they wilt. Learn how to fly from watching butterflies and have dinner with the moon. Be calm and see the silly in the serious and learn to smile again like it was something new.
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The Eiru Inheritance (Contest Entry)
Have you ever thought you heard someone call your name and when you check it turns out no one did? Well that happened to me one morning. It was strange that I thought I heard someone call me because I live alone. Well, not completely alone. There’s my dog Bob, but he can’t talk so he could never call me. But I could swear I heard someone call “Anna”, just as I was getting up this morning. After a few moments of listening for the call to come again and then wondering why I was waiting for no one to call me, I dragged myself out of bed and got ready for work.
I had the morning news on in the background as I finished getting ready. I brushed my blonde hair in the usual way and took stock of the pink streak in it. It would probably stay bright like that for about another week before I have to color it again.
According to the news, the weather would be nice so I grabbed a light jacket, fed Bob and was on my way to the door when I noticed the stack of unopened mail. I
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Edward and Bella vs Jacob and Bella
Note that this comparison is based mostly on the first three books because I have only seen clips of the movies and have not read Breaking Dawn. What I know about Breaking Dawn comes from internet research including book reviews, and trips to the Twilight wikia.
Edward and Bella
    ·         Their relationship is very uneven. Edwards is rich and beautiful. Bella is plain and middle class. She complains about the unevenness of the relationship. Bella constantly feels like she doesn’t belong with Edward and that he is too good for her. He is out of her league.  
    ·         Edward makes decisions about her life without consulting her. Example: The decision to try to hide Bella from James by running away was made without her consent and she begs Edward to let her go home to say something to her father before they leave Forks.
 
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Literature
What's it like
What's it like being poor in America
being told that your poverty is your fault
get a job you lazy bum
how do you know how hard I've worked
when it's hard just to get out of bed everyday
What's it like being poor in America
and bursting into tears while getting dressed
going to a job interview today
crying because I want this job so badly
because I hate waking up every day in this place
What's it like being poor in America
and stretching twenty dollars for two weeks
because that's all I have
wishing I could buy my son new shoes
What's it like being poor in America
when I have a job that pays so little
and my paycheck is a bad joke
knowing that somewhere an executive
is making 230 times more money than me
What's it like being poor in America
depending on the government to keep my family from starving
when the County Assistance Office never answers the phone
if there is a problem you go to the office
and wait all day not to be told
why my foodstamps where cut off
after I turned in the co
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Literature
Zelda's Revenge
She didn’t know how long she’d been standing there trying to make a decision. Her tears had dried on her face. Princess Zelda stared at the body of the man she loved and remembered the warmth of him. She remembered the way he would touch her and how protected she felt in his arms. She remembered his sweet smile and the taste of his kiss. She remembered his soft voice when he told her he loved her and his powerful cry when he was in battle. He was her hero and her husband. Her lover and protector of her kingdom.
Zelda remembered Link’s life in a futile attempt to erase his last moments from her mind. He had been captured. The minions of the evil man he had destroyed had come together to get their revenge. Ever since he had defeated Ganondorf people would call on Link to handle any stray monsters that were left. The monsters had been attacking a town and kidnapped a few of the town’s people. The monsters knew the people would turn to Link for help. When he came, t
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Jacob Black is a Girl
"Anything else?" I asked.
He wrinkled his nose again. "Well... I was wondering ... do you... y'know, kiss him?"
I laughed. "Yes."
He shuddered. "Ugh."
"To each her own," I murmured.
Jacob asking Bella about kissing Edward.
Eclipse by Stephanie Meyer page 218
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Plot Holes and Lapses in Logic 2
Have you ever been reading a book or watching a movie and something happens that makes absolutely no sense. A moment in a film that takes you out of the movie because it is so stupid, a section of a book that makes you read it over just to make sure you read it right. This is what I’m talking about. Plot holes and lapses in logic.
Thor Directed by Kenneth Branagh
I really like this movie. As superhero movies go this one is done pretty well, but there is one part in the film that bothers me a lot. One part that takes me out of the film. Now if you haven’t seen the movie you may want to stop reading when you come to the warning. It’s not a huge spoiler. I’m not going to give away the ending to the film.  
SPOILER WARNING
In the beginning of the film, Thor acts like an idiot and gets banished to earth without his godly powers. Later, his father Odin goes into his Odinsleep and his brother Loki becomes king of Asgard. After Loki becomes king he starts trying to
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Bubbles
blowing bubbles
just to escape my troubles
watching the life so short
from my wand to the ground
bursting all around
all just for sport
then one breaks away
escaping the game we play
carried away by the breeze
never saying good bye
I watch the bubble fly
high above the trees
the bubble is free
not like me
stuck in the life I live
watching everyday
hope fading away
dreams falling through a sieve
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Plot Holes and Lapses in Logic
Have you ever been reading a book or watching a movie and something happens that makes absolutely no sense. A moment in a film that takes you out of the movie because it is so stupid, a section of a book that makes you read it over again just to make sure you read it right. This is what I'm talking about. Plot holes and lapses in logic. One of the things that make books and movies popular, successful, and gets good reviews is when they makes sense to more than just the people who made them. As a writer, I have to make sure my stories make sense to more than just me or there is no point in anyone else reading them.
 
My first example of a lapse in logic comes from Twilight by Stephanie Meyer. Note that my observations are based on the book Twilight and not the movie which I have not seen.
There is a scene in the book when the main family of vampires, the Cullens, are playing baseball in a clearing in the forest. Their game is interrupted when three more vampires show up and ask to join
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Jesus Dances
I imagine Jesus likes to dance.
When I feel alone
I turn on the radio
I dance
and I know I'm not alone
Because Jesus is dancing with me
His robe sways in perfect time
His rhythm so much better than mine
And when I sing off key
I know he won't laugh at me
We laugh together
We dance together
and through him
I know I am free.
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Author's Note Fanfiction Profile
FanFiction Pen Name: Emmadel  http://www.fanfiction.net/u/4113264/
What I Write For: Twilight, Legend of Zelda, Mass Effect
Warnings: Some sexual content, some strong language, suicide and violence
Rating: K+ to M
Genres: Drama, Romance, Angst, Tragedy
I don't do much with OCs at the moment. I like to stick with the characters the universe I'm writing for.
What I write for Twilight is anti Twilight in nature although there are no angry rants about how much I hate Edward and Bella. Even people who love Twilight can find something to like in my work.
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Not Enough (A Twilight fanfiction)
I can't say how long I've been standing here. I don't even know why I came. I just needed to be alone. I wanted to run away from home and I ended up here standing outside the home of my best friend Jacob Black. This is the home he built for his family. He had lived here with his wife and their four children. Most of them were gone now either living on their own or in college. Only his youngest, Olivia, still lived in the house, but tonight Sarah and her husband were visiting and they brought the baby with them. Sarah was his oldest girl. She'd been married for a while and recently gave birth to her first child. Jacob's first grandchild was a beautiful baby boy he was now holding in his large arms.
The family had just eaten dinner and was now relaxing, talking, and laughing together. They seem…happy. There's Jacob's wife, Mrs. Elizabeth Black. She's still so beautiful thirty years after they married. He never imprinted on anyone. He chose her. He met her in college while he was studying
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Jacob's Rebellion (Why Imprinting Sucks)
He sat on the edge of a cliff both literally and figuratively. He'd been there for hours ever sense he'd imprinted on the child. He let the reality of what had happened wash over him. He had been so in love with Bella. It was as real to him as the grass and trees, but he did not imprint on her. Jacob Black imprinted on her child. The half vampire baby of the girl he loved and the blood sucker he hated. How was that possible? It made no sense to him and it tore his heart in two. Had he not suffered enough? He had the misfortune of falling in love with Bella Swan. She denied loving him and then when she finally admitted that she did love him it still wasn't enough. She was going to marry Edward.
The tears fell down his face as he remembered the pain that followed. He could do nothing as the girl he loved married another man. Then she got pregnant with a child that ultimately killed her.  After that he imprinted on the child. He was grieving for Bella and full of hate for the child t
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I have spent too much time not writing. I discovered that I was a writer a long time ago, but recently I have not been writing very much. I let other things distract me. I was to busy watching other people be creative and I was not being creative myself. I was playing video games, watching netflix and living on Youtube. 

There are a number of reasons why I wasn't writing. First I had a full time job which included a long commute every day. I don't drive so I had to ride the bus for about 1 1/2 hours to 2 hours every day both coming and going. So Monday to Friday I was at work or commuting for about 12 1/2 hours a day. That time could grow if I stayed late or missed the bus and had to wait for the next one. On the weekends I would sleep a lot and take care of my son. There was also house work.

After about two years I left that job and took a different one that was still a long commute. Eventually I lost that job and I began living on Youtube feeling like a failure because I was fired. 34 Years old, jobless and still living with my mother. My plans to move out stalled when I became unemployed. Eventually I came to the realization that living on Youtube was not helping the situation and I decided to do something else. 

Fast forward a few months and I am employed again although only part time and am again trying to write. I stated some time ago that I would still be a writer even if I never made any money from my work. I stopped being a writer when I stopped writing. I was just someone who thought she could write. Now I want to write again and more importantly, I have found something to write about. There is a deep, fundamental part of me that is not happy unless I am putting words on a page. She is excited again and hopefully will be posting something soon. 
  • Listening to: A heater
  • Reading: Redshirts
  • Watching: Nothing
  • Playing: The Legend of Zelda: Breath of the Wild
  • Eating: Pizza
  • Drinking: Water
I have spent too much time not writing. I discovered that I was a writer a long time ago, but recently I have not been writing very much. I let other things distract me. I was to busy watching other people be creative and I was not being creative myself. I was playing video games, watching netflix and living on Youtube. 

There are a number of reasons why I wasn't writing. First I had a full time job which included a long commute every day. I don't drive so I had to ride the bus for about 1 1/2 hours to 2 hours every day both coming and going. So Monday to Friday I was at work or commuting for about 12 1/2 hours a day. That time could grow if I stayed late or missed the bus and had to wait for the next one. On the weekends I would sleep a lot and take care of my son. There was also house work.

After about two years I left that job and took a different one that was still a long commute. Eventually I lost that job and I began living on Youtube feeling like a failure because I was fired. 34 Years old, jobless and still living with my mother. My plans to move out stalled when I became unemployed. Eventually I came to the realization that living on Youtube was not helping the situation and I decided to do something else. 

Fast forward a few months and I am employed again although only part time and am again trying to write. I stated some time ago that I would still be a writer even if I never made any money from my work. I stopped being a writer when I stopped writing. I was just someone who thought she could write. Now I want to write again and more importantly, I have found something to write about. There is a deep, fundamental part of me that is not happy unless I am putting words on a page. She is excited again and hopefully will be posting something soon. 
  • Listening to: A heater
  • Reading: Redshirts
  • Watching: Nothing
  • Playing: The Legend of Zelda: Breath of the Wild
  • Eating: Pizza
  • Drinking: Water

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I am a writer because I was born that way. I have stories in my head all the time. Most of then never get written down or finished. If I never make a single penny from my work I am still a writer. I will die with a bookshelf full of my notebooks with all my little writings in them.

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